Brand Book · Marketing 760 · For Michael Buckhoff · 13 May 2026
Vol. II The Brand Book
Prepared by Marketing 760 · 13 May 2026 · v1.0
The Better TOEFL Scores brand book.
Every color, font, spacing token, component, shadow, asset, voice rule, and schema declaration used across the funnel. One source of truth. Click any color swatch to copy the hex value.
Picture Michael in his office at CSU San Bernardino. A student sits across from him. He has read their essay. He is not lecturing. He is helping. Direct, warm, specific. He uses simple words because the student needs to understand, not because he can't write big ones. Every sentence on the website should sound like that office.
01
Plain English
Most readers are studying for the TOEFL. English is their second language. Words have to be the simple ones. Short sentences. If a 15-year-old non-native speaker would stumble on a word, swap it.
Don't "We leverage rubric-aligned methodology to unlock score velocity."
Do "I grade your speaking attempt against the rubric. Then I tell you the three things to fix."
02
First person
Michael speaks for Michael. Not "the team." Not "we." Not "Better TOEFL Scores believes." It is I. That is the differentiator: one named professor grades every attempt.
Don't "Our experts provide world-class feedback."
Do "I grade every Speaking attempt myself. No assistants. No AI."
03
Specific, not technical
The expert mark is specifics, not jargon. "Eight-second prompt restatement" beats "ineffective rhetorical preamble." Page numbers, score numbers, week counts, dollar amounts. Real data. No buzzwords.
Don't "Optimize your rhetorical pacing for maximum scoring impact."
Do "On page 12 there is a fix for the 8-second prompt restatement habit. The 2026 rubric punishes it."
04
Warm, not corporate
Michael is your neighbor, not a SaaS app. Use contractions (it's, you'll, we'll). Use direct address ("you"). Light humor lands if it is honest. Never sell with fear.
Don't "Limited time offer. Act now or miss out."
Do "If you want me to grade one of your attempts, $19 buys you that. No card on file. No rush."
05
No idioms, no slang
"Crack the code." "Knock it out of the park." "A no-brainer." A native English speaker reads past these. A reader from Tehran, Lagos, or Shanghai stops and translates. Skip the figures of speech. If you can't say it plainly, you don't yet understand it.
Don't "Knock your Speaking section out of the park."
Do "Move your Speaking score from 22 to 26."
06
Numbers do the selling
"Many students" persuades nobody. "9,231 attempts graded since 2002" persuades. Use exact numbers, real dates, named credentials, verified before/after scores. Generic words shrink trust. Specific words build it.
Don't "Trusted by thousands of students worldwide."
Do "9,231 Speaking and Writing attempts graded since 2002. 17,700 YouTube subscribers. CSU San Bernardino lecturer since 1997."
Do (sentence-level rules)
Short sentences. Aim 12 to 18 words. One idea each.
Active voice. "I grade attempts," not "attempts are graded."
Concrete nouns. "Essay," "score," "playbook," "fee." Not "solution," "experience."
Use numerals for numbers ≥ 10. ("9,231" not "nine thousand").
Common words first. "Help" before "facilitate." "Show" before "demonstrate."
Spell TOEFL iBT exactly. Always capitalize.
Don't (anti-patterns)
Em dashes (—). Use a comma, a period, or parentheses.
Capitalized headlines. "Discover The Best TOEFL Coaching Today" reads like spam.
Reading level
Grade 8–9
Flesch–Kincaid. Run any page through hemingwayapp.com before publishing. Two long sentences max per paragraph.
Avg sentence length
14 words
Mix short (5–8 words) and medium (15–20). No sentence over 30 words.
Pronoun balance
"You" > "I"
Address the reader twice as often as Michael talks about himself. The page is for them.
Numbers on page
≥ 5 per page
Years, scores, page counts, prices, sample sizes. Specifics anchor trust.
No. 02 Color Palette
Color.
Eleven colors. Warm paper foundation, deep ink ground, oxblood accent for editorial pulls, brass gold for highlights, sage for affirmation. No neons. No purples. No gradients except subtle warm vignettes.
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Paper · Foundation
Paper
#f6f1e7
Primary background. Warm cream, applied to body, nav, cards.
Most students plateau at Speaking 22 because they treat the TOEFL as a fluency test. It is a rubric test. Six to nine weeks of focused practice with real feedback closes the gap.
Eight-step rhythm, 4-pixel base. Every section padding, grid gap, and margin pulls from this scale. No magic numbers.
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No. 05 Shadows
Elevation.
Five shadow tokens. Card & Pop for default elevation. Deep for hero/featured. Offset (oxblood or ink) for editorial card framing · the magazine-cover stack.
Card--shadow-card
Pop--shadow-pop
Deep--shadow-deep
Offset Oxblood--shadow-offset-ox
Offset Ink--shadow-offset-ink
No. 06 Components
Components.
The shared parts. Each is built on the spacing scale and color palette above. Use these instead of inventing new variants.
A note in the marginMarginalia are used for asides, credentials lists, footnotes, and quiet annotations. Mono font, oxblood left rule, ink-mute body. Appears in About blocks and FAQ asides.
Big number .big-number
9,231
Hand-drawn underline .underline-hand
The audience can smell hype at fifty paces.
Drop cap .dropcap
Michael has been teaching academic writing and ESL composition at California State University, San Bernardino since 1997. The drop cap signals an editorial register and slows the reader on the opening paragraph.
Source files for all imagery used in the funnel. Editorial photography only. AI-generated still life only (no AI-generated faces). Real student headshot uses Michael's own portrait.
Hero · Page 01
Professor's Desk
Higgsfield · nano_banana_2 · 1376×768 · 198 KB JPEG · Editorial overhead still life
max-width: 760 px · padding 0 40 px · centered. Used for centered hero text (Page 02 confirmation).
No. 09 SEO & Schema
SEO & structured data.
Every page ships with full meta (title, description, canonical, OG, Twitter Card) plus JSON-LD. Identity schemas attach to Michael, brand schemas attach to Better TOEFL Scores, offer schemas attach to the product.
Person
Michael Buckhoff. Includes jobTitle, worksFor (CSUSB), alumniOf, image, sameAs YouTube, description with credential summary. Lives on Page 01.
Organization
Better TOEFL Scores. Founder = Michael, foundingDate 2002, sameAs YouTube. Referenced by all other schemas via @id.
Course
The 7-Step Playbook. Free offer ($0), aggregateRating from collected testimonials, courseInstance with online mode + workload PT1H30M.
Product + AggregateOffer
Coaching service. Three sub-offers ($19, $99/mo, $899/yr) with UnitPriceSpecification + billingDuration. Lives on Page 04 pricing.
FAQPage
On Pages 01 + 04. Six Q&A entries per page. Even though Google deprecated FAQ rich results, the schema still feeds AI engines (Perplexity, ChatGPT) and supports topic-cluster understanding.
Review
K.H. pharmacist case. Rating 5 stars, reviewBody pulled verbatim from real testimonial.
H2 Stacking
Target queries. "Best TOEFL prep course," "TOEFL Speaking section tips 2026," "How to improve TOEFL score 22 to 26," "TOEFL Speaking & Writing feedback." Distributed across body, never dump-blocked.
Meta
Per-page. Title (≤62 chars), meta description (≤160 chars), canonical, og:type, og:title, og:description, og:url, og:image, twitter:card=summary_large_image.
No. 10 Decorative Elements
Editorial decoration.
Small ornaments that hold the magazine aesthetic. Use sparingly · one or two per section, never more.
Section ornament .rule-ornament
Footnote ref sup.fn
As reported in the 2026 ETS handbook[1], the new rubric penalizes the 8-second restatement habit.
Mockup banner .mockup-banner
See the dark ink band at the very top of this page. Mono, gold "Marketing 760" emphasis, 9-px vertical padding.
Section mark variants
No. 01 An Invitation
Vol. III Internal Reference
No. IV The Rate Card
No. 11 Don'ts
Anti-patterns.
Tells of AI-generated UI & copy. Forbidden across all funnel pages. Re-run Impeccable (impeccable detect) before shipping any new page.
Visual Don'ts
Side-tab borders. Thick coloured left border on a card. Use top rules or full borders instead.
Purple-on-white gradients. The cliché SaaS palette. Stay in the warm-paper palette.
Inter, Roboto, system-ui. Generic body fonts. EB Garamond only.
Stock photography. AI-generated faces, generic "happy student" hero shots. Editorial still life or real photographs only.
Hero CTAs in vibrant orange/green. Use ink, paper, oxblood, or gold variants.
Animated gradient backgrounds. Static paper texture only.
Copy Don'ts
Em dashes (—). Use commas, parens, or full stops.
"Leverage / unlock / transform / journey." AI tells.